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Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/23/24, 1:22 PM
I would give them 5 stars. I want to join that gym.

11/23/24, 3:40 PM
@gdlosh13@gmail.com Me too!!! Just so you know, a couple other things inspired this story. Obviously, I mentioned my recent trip to the gym, and which I noticed the cum-like soap in the shower. But at my local gym, which happens to be very close to a military base, I notice a lot of the guys posing in the locker room. Men between the ages of 18 - 30, seem to stand in front of the mirror (half-naked or fully clothed) and just talk selfies over and over. I've never seen anything quite like it. Plus there's a guy on [Instagram](https://www.instagram.com/rickyaldrete/) who takes this really hot gym selfies. He's always wearing spandex, and just looks incredibly hot. So I guess the combination of all this got me thinking about a hot, gym transformation scene. Again, it's a gym that I would want to join.

Anonymous
11/23/24, 4:00 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Well I was am extremely hot story. I did not see ir coming until the soap scene. I was hooked. Well to be honest I was hooked from the flashes. I am not a gym person but would join that one.
Nov 22, 2024
11/23/24, 10:01 AM
This store was awesome. It is a nice change of pace from your usual work, but please take it a a compliment! You are really showcasing your writing skills in different genres. The pacing was good and action was better. Thank you for writing! Always looking forward to reading your stuff!

11/23/24, 3:34 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) I appreciate the compliment. Thanks.
Oct 28, 2024
Tim
11/23/24, 2:05 PM
really hot set of transformations… especially loved the transformation of Officer Todd McCord… would love to hear about what lead to the 911 call from Jeremiah and Jacob… who made the call and who lead the transformation and who lead the resistance within the household!!!

11/23/24, 2:36 PM
@Tim haha I am really pleased to hear you liked it! As for Jeremiah and Jacob...I will leave that up to your imagination :P
11/23/24, 2:30 PM
The moment I started reading I knew I'm going to binge this story. I'm curious to see what happens next. I know it's part of the plot and all, but I have to say: Mike is a terrible doctor both ethically and professionally. Anna deserves a raise and a promotion.
tim
11/23/24, 2:14 PM
one day i hope we find out if Calvin returned to the Hayek Club
Tim
11/23/24, 2:11 PM
Always have found this story so well written and hot!!! Sad there isn’t more or more from the author.
tom
11/23/24, 1:55 PM
such a brilliant series with an amazing ending. I did not see that coming but was hot!
11/19/24, 7:38 PM
Damn hot. What a wild ride.

11/22/24, 11:05 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you very much. Now this story I can claim sole credit for because AI had nothing to do with it - it's all me! You probably noticed the difference in writing style.

11/23/24, 11:49 AM
@[Jamr](/user/show/10006831) Yes, I did. Throwing no shade on your AI collaborator :-), I think this story reads hotter.

11/23/24, 12:55 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Of my own work, this is the one I am most proud of.

11/23/24, 1:48 PM
@[Jamr](/user/show/10006831) You should be. The surrender is off the charts. Email me. Would love to chat about the AI that you use and how it works.
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/23/24, 1:23 PM
I would give that gym 5 stars. I want to join that gym.
11/23/24, 1:15 PM
Great start! Looking forward to seeing where this is going.