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10/5/19, 4:37 PM
Personally, I'd only really planned the story up to this point, though I really like the setup and I have ideas for later in the story as Tom gets settled into Jason's company and starts having the pheromone freely available to him. Edlam and I were talking, though, and he has some ideas for Caden, so we're going to make this a dual-author series. He's busy on his own stuff now, but said he'll probably write a chapter from Caden's POV after that. We'll see what happens from there.
Spark
10/5/19, 4:14 PM
As always, your writing is a fantastical read. I enjoyed how you wired all three of them to be something different and the focus on Evan's development is in this chapter is incredible. Will this be a continuing series like how long-running Web of Trust is?
Martin
10/5/19, 2:28 PM
> Just one question - how can this story be published on 16th October when that is date in the future? That's my mistake - it's actually the date until this story is pinned at the top. The actual publishing date is different of course. I've got to fix that, thanks for letting me know!
Anonymous
10/5/19, 2:21 PM
I love this! I can't wait for what comes next.
Anonymous
10/5/19, 1:38 PM
More feet please! I love feet!
Anonymous
10/5/19, 12:16 PM
Hot as ever. Than you. Just one question - how can this story be published on 16th October when that is date in the future?
mike7774u@yahoo.ca
10/5/19, 11:06 AM
Oh man, I'm still trying to catch my breathe. It took a bit of reading for me to get into it. Once there though my arousal went from zero to one hundred very quickly. I reached the boiling point before I could finish reading the story ( I'm cool though, I'm cool). I look forwards to reading more from this writer. I love mind control fantasy stories and movies.
Anonymous
10/5/19, 9:06 AM
soooo hot!!! is there a second part with patrick getting manned up ?
10/5/19, 6:30 AM
As with the previous chapter, I didn't have any particular actors in mind, only vague images, so there's no suggested cast. But, for those who like the visuals, here are the people I mentioned in the comments of the previous chapter as being at least close to what I was imagining. [Jason](https://www.imdb.com/name/nm0005454/mediaviewer/rm3564663552) (but tone down the attractiveness so he's not bad looking, but not terribly hot) [Evan](https://cdn.helixstudios.com/img/320w/media/headshots/cameron-lane.1468273423.jpg) [Caden](https://cdn.helixstudios.com/img/320w/media/headshots/preston-hale.1516314460.jpg) Tom: [general look, body shape/size](http://xpday.info/images/3a119e804b7f3463b527179060606065.jpg) and [body/facial hair and cock](https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-hMsDst13e1M/V5yK9rGPvZI/AAAAAAAAe4I/LK9PQ35lO2UN_asRa_xbNuYqslnozIOZgCLcB/s1600/gay-hairy-middle-eastern-men-nude.jpg).
Sep 30, 2019
The_Supernatural_D
10/5/19, 4:27 AM
This is very wholesome and wonderful. I love it!