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mike7774u@yahoo.ca
10/5/19, 11:06 AM
Oh man, I'm still trying to catch my breathe. It took a bit of reading for me to get into it. Once there though my arousal went from zero to one hundred very quickly. I reached the boiling point before I could finish reading the story ( I'm cool though, I'm cool). I look forwards to reading more from this writer. I love mind control fantasy stories and movies.
Anonymous
10/5/19, 9:06 AM
soooo hot!!! is there a second part with patrick getting manned up ?
10/5/19, 6:30 AM
As with the previous chapter, I didn't have any particular actors in mind, only vague images, so there's no suggested cast. But, for those who like the visuals, here are the people I mentioned in the comments of the previous chapter as being at least close to what I was imagining. [Jason](https://www.imdb.com/name/nm0005454/mediaviewer/rm3564663552) (but tone down the attractiveness so he's not bad looking, but not terribly hot) [Evan](https://cdn.helixstudios.com/img/320w/media/headshots/cameron-lane.1468273423.jpg) [Caden](https://cdn.helixstudios.com/img/320w/media/headshots/preston-hale.1516314460.jpg) Tom: [general look, body shape/size](http://xpday.info/images/3a119e804b7f3463b527179060606065.jpg) and [body/facial hair and cock](https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-hMsDst13e1M/V5yK9rGPvZI/AAAAAAAAe4I/LK9PQ35lO2UN_asRa_xbNuYqslnozIOZgCLcB/s1600/gay-hairy-middle-eastern-men-nude.jpg).
Sep 30, 2019
The_Supernatural_D
10/5/19, 4:27 AM
This is very wholesome and wonderful. I love it!
10/5/19, 3:56 AM
I'm just doing my final read-through now. I was hoping to have it out by now, but I got waylaid by other things. Still, it should be out within the next 24 hours or so, plus however long it takes to get approved. (It's nearly 20k words, so it may take some time.)
Anonymous
10/5/19, 1:52 AM
cant wait for chapter 2!!
Suitedsubmissive
10/4/19, 9:38 PM
Great story. I love works with SPH and general humiliation and take downs! As the proud owner of a tiny dick myself, i can assure you that JH came to enjoy his new status in life!
Anonymous
10/4/19, 6:55 PM
This is a brilliant adaptation. Really first rate. I've read and enjoyed all of the 'Crazy Week' adaptations and this one may be my favorite. I particularly enjoyed your addition of the auditorium scene.
xerxes
10/4/19, 4:14 PM
Excellent story and writing. Kept my interest. Hope you continue. Anticipate Jeff spiraling further but not having an easy time with it.
Anonymous
10/4/19, 3:35 PM
I wasn't really into all of the rubber stuff, but the gradual changes to their sexual preferences and their actions becoming more sexual definitely got me going. Top notch!