Recent Comments

Martin
10/3/19, 1:07 PM
> I kinda wanna write my own fanon sequel bit to this one, but that might be treading on your toes. Go ahead, as long as you credit the original story and its author, there's no problem with that.
Bell
10/3/19, 12:59 PM
God, this is amazing I kinda wanna write my own fanon sequel bit to this one, but that might be treading on your toes.
Anonymous
10/3/19, 12:40 PM
Sir, I check for the next installment several times a day. My excitement is beginning to overcome me. I need to know what happens next!
Anonymous
10/2/19, 3:19 PM
The narrator behaves like he's God, judging everybody and meeting out (or is it "meating out") punishment arbitrarily. Too many of these stories are about people with anger issues and no moral sense.
Anonymous
10/2/19, 2:01 PM
Dude, i'd love to hear more stories about john henry being himself, i really got off on him being cocky and confident. its really my thing!
Anonymous
10/2/19, 2:01 PM
Suggestion for next nano upgrade: the ability to transmit the sensory and motor input/outputs of the master and subject's brains to each other and truly take control. Possess them.
Anonymous
10/2/19, 1:58 PM
I wonder if there was anyone in that locker room who didn't have nanobots and had no idea what was happening... and just played along so they wouldn't be found out...
ForgottenCradle
10/2/19, 1:24 PM
thrilled to see how far this can go
10/2/19, 1:22 PM
I'm a big fan of cock shrinking, and this story really got at those kinks perfectly! Not as big on public humiliation, but I like the way you did it. These nanobots are a wonderfully flexible device! ;)
ForgottenCradle
10/2/19, 1:04 PM
normally, I'm not into superhero universes and stories,but you build a world and characters that actually have progression and it's beautiful to see unfold