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ForgottenCradle
10/2/19, 1:04 PM
normally, I'm not into superhero universes and stories,but you build a world and characters that actually have progression and it's beautiful to see unfold
Anonymous
10/2/19, 12:06 PM
cant wait! Also glad Edlam is doing well
Anonymous
10/2/19, 5:29 AM
I LOVE weight gain stories, especially those filled with desire and gluttony like this one. Stunningly original....but in all fairness, some may find it blasphemous.
Anonymous
10/2/19, 5:27 AM
John needs a daddy
Ken
10/2/19, 5:22 AM
I thought it was a pretty great story. a bit of a shame he couldn't get some of his length and girth back as a reward. You should probably pick on the biggest jerks. Obviously the jocks. Not all. Just the real asses that there always are. For example, The ones that are always picking on the littlest guy or nerd. Give the person some of their muscle and sports skills while diminishing theirs. Basically as they lose the other gets. If their good at football, the other person gets their skills and muscle, and so on. Use the football, baseball, basketball, wrestlers, and any other sports there are. Also, maybe turn their obsession of torment into lust for the victims too. Turn them into lovestruck bottom boys or something. If they like to get physical with whoever, maybe make them crave bondage or toys or wearing womens clothes or something on that part. Which might be a way of getting back as they call others sissies. Wow. Kinda got carried away. Anyway, hope you like some of my ideas.
Anonymous
10/2/19, 4:00 AM
Very interesting and innovative being the technology of today.
Stephen
10/2/19, 12:54 AM
This us a wonderful story. Unlike any I have read before. You did a fantastic job of development. 5 stars My friend. Thank you.
screamingmoist
10/2/19, 12:54 AM
Thanks! Happy to hear people are enjoying it. Fun to break out of the usual mold every now and then.
Anonymous
10/2/19, 12:09 AM
how about a waiter getting revenge on a pair of rude customers, who thanks to the ring end up severing him. ;)