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Anonymous
9/30/19, 2:50 AM
I wonder if there are other people out of town that has chip in them... that would be hot !
Anonymous
9/30/19, 2:41 AM
It's such a great idea broadcasting heroes being humiliated,but i think it's missing a final touch--the defeated hero needs a collar around his neck to show the world his slave stats and ownership to his master.IMO,a slave without collar is incomplete and the most erotic part to me in the first chapter is the depiction of the enslaved heroes out in public naked with their collars on.it's so humiliating and i like it.and i could tell we both share the same fondness for collars,so honestly i'm kinda surprised with the lack of a collar.Anyway it's a great plot.cant wait to c what's cumming next.Hopefully,we could c the defeated hero get mind-wiped and going through some hard trainings.And i've got a suggestion..I read s story about superman being enslaved long time ago.,but what i like it the most is,in the end,the villain trained the mind-wiped superman to be a dog and thought of teaching his dog more tricks then said to his dog who's drinking his master's piss from its dog bowl on his hand and knees in its dog cage,"if only the citizens could c how humiliated you are".i admit that ever since then,enslaved heroes doing dog tricks for their masters in public with all the citizens watching has become the most erotic fantasy to me and i've been waiting for an author writing it.So...what do u think of the idea?I think centurion is a great candidate for he role:p
Butch Hafley
9/30/19, 1:48 AM
This one needs to continue.
9/30/19, 12:31 AM
It was pretty cool and a nice piece of poetic justice, although I've personally not beem too crazy about present-tense narrative style...but that's just me,
Anonymous
9/29/19, 11:41 PM
Power down mode is hot. I think it should be used to corrupt Uncle Butch, make him tell his nephew what he's really thinking when he's being defensive.
Anonymous
9/29/19, 11:39 PM
Great story so far, keep it up! Maybe Aaron wants to encourage Butch to bulk up more, and turn him into more of a slut for cock.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/29/19, 10:56 PM
Well Drake, you and change the Football players into wrestlers, I think it will still work, do you?
9/29/19, 10:56 PM
The more I think on it the more I find the idea of making the older sister into an older brother who is super subby and needy a very very hot one. Not to repeat the idea but imagibe a guy who is the only son im a family of say six sisters. He is treated poorly by his mother and ignored by his pushed aside father. He uses the ring to basically turn them male, give his father some self respect, and cause them all to sexually submit.
9/29/19, 10:52 PM
I'm not entirely sure about the mpreg, not so much its ecistemce but rather using it on the boyfriend. Honestly, reading the tagline I thought the mother might become a man and the father was going to be given mpreg state. While overcoming family hated is fun another potential way is a guy trwated poorly by his classmates uses the ring to make them his good boys.
Anonymous
9/29/19, 10:46 PM
want so much more sad thats it.