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9/29/19, 10:35 PM
Joaopomilio: That's quite the suggestion. I will think on it, but I had another football theme in mind.
UchihaDEMS
9/29/19, 9:38 PM
Dunno, the power down state is kinda hot, maybe explore more about it? Maybe a kink? Also, daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam that cliffhanger!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/29/19, 9:24 PM
I have a suggestion, what about a water boy uses the ring to turn the whole football team making them all gay and dating each other, and even the coaches becoming a threesome, and the water boy gets the guy who he had crush (and was the token good member of the team) and turns the worse of the guys becomes the team's cumdump
Elm
9/29/19, 8:57 PM
ahhhhh cliffhangers!!!
9/29/19, 8:03 PM
I'd love to read more. I’m not sure where it’s going but it felt like it was just getting to the good part, with Brendan having more sex, and he and Jake both getting hotter bodies. Please continue this :)
NZcontroller
9/29/19, 4:27 PM
fuck that was hot !! I think he should keep on exploring his sexuality. get the dad to transform into a submissive b version of himself one night ;) or a suggestible one. would be great of some psychological changes can stay on even when he is awake. thanks for writing !!
9/29/19, 2:55 PM
The idea is quite novel; I'm always a fan of theslow build
Sep 16, 2019
Anonymous
9/29/19, 2:24 PM
Love it!! Definitely needs a sequel :D Can't wait to read what the dorm room looks like after everyone's been to the gym in one of Bodhi's jockstraps.
Anonymous
9/29/19, 12:50 PM
very hot
9/29/19, 12:32 PM
Love a good cop story.