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9/28/19, 3:01 AM
The premise here is hot, but you need to slow down and add more detail in order to build a sense of dramatic tension in each scene.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/28/19, 1:15 AM
Perfect for a submissive domestic servant!
9/28/19, 12:04 AM
It's with the proofreaders now, then I have a bit more I want to add at the end. After Chapter 2, though, you'll have to bug Edlam if you want more, cuz we've floated the idea that he might write a chapter for it.
9/27/19, 10:26 PM
The basic idea - of a professor who is doing something to students - is hot, though I have to admit the whole brain drain and permanent dumbing down is not to my liking.
Martin
9/27/19, 10:06 PM
Your story made me hard, but I don't get how Mark's brain actually got drained. And we only learn the result, not how it's happening, and the process is usually the best part for me...
lloyd
9/27/19, 7:22 PM
just found this amazing story.......so good...so hope there is more!!!!!! Love love love man musk transformations.....Marky becomes drunk on all the mens sweaty bodies, pits, feet ,crotch, and ass licking and sucking out in the hot sun as he works as part of the crew building his body as they use him mercilessly......funny mental pictures I painted the story is that good............damn will be checking in on this site and looking for future chapters I hope...
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/27/19, 6:46 PM
will we see part 5 soon?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/27/19, 6:04 PM
will we see more?
Anonymous
9/27/19, 2:19 PM
Crude mouth? Nothing Jason said so too outlandish. Surprisingly good character writing though
Anonymous
9/27/19, 1:58 PM
I really hope this story gets continued :'(