Recent Comments

Demospam7@hotmail.nl
9/28/19, 1:20 PM
My god that was awesome!
Stellar
9/28/19, 1:07 PM
While the first and second were fun, the story seems kinda boring after awhile. Like, everyone is corrupted and those that are left are prisoners waiting to be corrupted. Something about the power dynamics in the story just feel off. Maybe the complete and total sweep that the takeover has been with practically no real resistance makes it sorta predictable and disappointing. If this gets finished and they do lure the Sun God I really do hope our author does something more interesting than "he also gets corrupted". I dunno, it just feels like the more satisfying ending at this point would be for the Sun God to come in and clean house.
Anonymous
9/28/19, 7:42 AM
The setting and basic idea is just what i love most. Details are important in this kind of narrative, especially when making it compelling and hot as f##k. My sweet spot is muscle growth; wish to see Professor create mindless, obedient athlete for coaches (losing individuality and focusing on game, training and sex). More than that I got interested in where you're ganna make this story go. Nice work!
The_Supernatural_D
9/28/19, 7:30 AM
Don't know what it is about this preppified stuff, but I'm really excited to see you writing again.
Bibimbap
9/28/19, 5:33 AM
I like this one more than the previous chapter. The humiliation and dumbing down are great! I love how the guys ridicule the dumb cow and he's too stupid to really notice it. I'm curious of where you're going to go now!
9/28/19, 3:51 AM
I love a good pup story and this was an awesome pup story. Such a great slow transformation, mind and body, and full circle taking a lonely guy into a room and watching him get caged....and a new pup to play with!! I loved it.
9/28/19, 3:01 AM
The premise here is hot, but you need to slow down and add more detail in order to build a sense of dramatic tension in each scene.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/28/19, 1:15 AM
Perfect for a submissive domestic servant!
9/28/19, 12:04 AM
It's with the proofreaders now, then I have a bit more I want to add at the end. After Chapter 2, though, you'll have to bug Edlam if you want more, cuz we've floated the idea that he might write a chapter for it.
9/27/19, 10:26 PM
The basic idea - of a professor who is doing something to students - is hot, though I have to admit the whole brain drain and permanent dumbing down is not to my liking.