Recent Comments

Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
9/27/19, 1:20 AM
i concur with what others have said: you show a lot of promise keep writing (and sharing)
Anonymous
9/27/19, 12:09 AM
Nice to read something new from you. "Hate my master" wasn't really going anywhere. Keep up the new style.
M
9/26/19, 8:44 PM
That was an awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next one!
Anonymous
9/26/19, 8:21 PM
PLEASE continue!!!
9/26/19, 5:39 PM
I really like the Litrpg video-game setting. Though I must admit I wished the player was dominate. Actually the concept has me thinking of a player with mimd control powers eho uses it go build a personal adventuring party harem.
9/26/19, 5:00 PM
Thanks guys! With regard to the explicitly-named abilities, I'm just following along the lines of some established Isekai stories like Overlord. This is the first story in its setting, but you'll see later that it's explicitly a video-game setting.
Anonymous
9/26/19, 4:22 PM
Wow, WHAT A hot story! I love the details on the clothes - I'll be tucking my shirt into my underwear from now on! By the way, maybe you could include more details on the haircutting (maybe a flashback?) or how the main characters looks and feels different now that his long cool manbun style has been cut into a neat short slicked style!
ForgottenCradle
9/26/19, 3:32 PM
I'm so glad to see one of my favorite series back. Had to read all the previous chapters again to get into the groove. so hot. I can already tell the werewolf family will be hot fucks
9/26/19, 11:51 AM
Thank you, PupScout! After 900 reads, I'm glad this chapter finally gets a comment! It's the unsung hero of this story. I understand why expository chapters don't get the attention they deserve -- I mean, there isn't much sex -- but so much important stuff happens in this type of chapter. As you note, the male group dynamic was important to establish -- I mean, c'mon, a New Superman shower masturbation scene? woof!!!! But stick with it. More's cumming...
Anonymous
9/26/19, 11:20 AM
Fantastic as always 👍 Im kinda of tempted to see chris and rob get punished; thinking he would deal some epic and hot revenge 😜