Recent Comments

nerdysuitedbaby
9/27/19, 7:27 AM
Love the new story hope he can still talk and all questions willingly. Set up some fun. issue though is that it felt short compared to your other stories. However love the locked suit, tight necktie, back brace and sock garters. Hope we find out he's more old school then we thought.
Anonymous
9/27/19, 7:17 AM
LOVED THIS!
Anonymous
9/27/19, 5:24 AM
I love you, too!
Readytochange
9/27/19, 4:15 AM
Yay a new story! I agree a flashback to him being changed would be hot. Looking forward to part 2
Anonymous
9/27/19, 2:38 AM
hope to see the Flash ;)
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
9/27/19, 1:20 AM
i concur with what others have said: you show a lot of promise keep writing (and sharing)
Anonymous
9/27/19, 12:09 AM
Nice to read something new from you. "Hate my master" wasn't really going anywhere. Keep up the new style.
M
9/26/19, 8:44 PM
That was an awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next one!
Anonymous
9/26/19, 8:21 PM
PLEASE continue!!!
9/26/19, 5:39 PM
I really like the Litrpg video-game setting. Though I must admit I wished the player was dominate. Actually the concept has me thinking of a player with mimd control powers eho uses it go build a personal adventuring party harem.