Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/27/19, 7:17 AM
LOVED THIS!
Anonymous
9/27/19, 5:24 AM
I love you, too!
Readytochange
9/27/19, 4:15 AM
Yay a new story! I agree a flashback to him being changed would be hot. Looking forward to part 2
Anonymous
9/27/19, 2:38 AM
hope to see the Flash ;)
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
9/27/19, 1:20 AM
i concur with what others have said: you show a lot of promise keep writing (and sharing)
Anonymous
9/27/19, 12:09 AM
Nice to read something new from you. "Hate my master" wasn't really going anywhere. Keep up the new style.
M
9/26/19, 8:44 PM
That was an awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next one!
Anonymous
9/26/19, 8:21 PM
PLEASE continue!!!
9/26/19, 5:39 PM
I really like the Litrpg video-game setting. Though I must admit I wished the player was dominate. Actually the concept has me thinking of a player with mimd control powers eho uses it go build a personal adventuring party harem.
9/26/19, 5:00 PM
Thanks guys! With regard to the explicitly-named abilities, I'm just following along the lines of some established Isekai stories like Overlord. This is the first story in its setting, but you'll see later that it's explicitly a video-game setting.