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Anonymous
9/25/19, 4:30 AM
Cute story! Ah, that twist. I wish those herbs were real!
UchihaDEMS
9/25/19, 3:37 AM
Well, it was short and rushed, but I'm glad you decided to start writing! I love myself some good old school nerd guy controlling the jock.
Anonymous
9/25/19, 3:02 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Willie Cici
9/25/19, 2:59 AM
Hyp - I thought about that, but then I thought: they're cousins and millennials. This generation is more accepting and tosses the weirdness aside. So I went with that approach instead.
Jan 15, 2019
Lost@SeaChad
9/25/19, 1:48 AM
HOT
Jul 23, 2019
LostChad
9/25/19, 1:28 AM
im hard af right now and yet while reading the spiral i must confess i felt horror for the sexy twink i really did. no disney ending here. my oh my , wow. well done. im paraphrasing here "Books/Stories are neither moral nor immoral ( amoral ? ) ......they are simply poorly written or well written" -Oscar Wilde "The Picture of Dorian Gray "
9/25/19, 12:02 AM
I usually stay away from super hero stories. But I'm glad this caught my attention and I read on. It was great...and no sex, no mind control...just a well told story. I'm looking forward to diving into the next chapters to see where it goes.
9/24/19, 9:31 PM
I gotta say I'm loving this story and hope it goes on a LONG time! Because of the links you provided, I explored this religion and it fascinates me. That you've added a cult-y brainwash-y angle to it makes it all the hotter. Keep up the great work!
abrobdl@gmail.com
9/24/19, 8:45 PM
I wouldn't mind having some for a couple of cute guys.
9/24/19, 8:32 PM
I really love this series--there's something very hot to me about the idea of unwitting guys getting recruited and sucked into a sex cult. But I did have a small critique of this chapter. Bryce's behavior just didn't make a lot of sense to me; when Lance is acting all brainwashed and creepy, Bryce just brushes it off and keeps spending lots of time with him every day. For me, the story would make more sense (and would be hotter) if Bryce was initially creeped out by Lance's "Temple of Phallus" talk and starts trying to avoid Lance, but then suddenly becomes more "open-minded" after Lance secretly drugs his drink.