Recent Comments

9/24/19, 9:31 PM
I gotta say I'm loving this story and hope it goes on a LONG time! Because of the links you provided, I explored this religion and it fascinates me. That you've added a cult-y brainwash-y angle to it makes it all the hotter. Keep up the great work!
abrobdl@gmail.com
9/24/19, 8:45 PM
I wouldn't mind having some for a couple of cute guys.
9/24/19, 8:32 PM
I really love this series--there's something very hot to me about the idea of unwitting guys getting recruited and sucked into a sex cult. But I did have a small critique of this chapter. Bryce's behavior just didn't make a lot of sense to me; when Lance is acting all brainwashed and creepy, Bryce just brushes it off and keeps spending lots of time with him every day. For me, the story would make more sense (and would be hotter) if Bryce was initially creeped out by Lance's "Temple of Phallus" talk and starts trying to avoid Lance, but then suddenly becomes more "open-minded" after Lance secretly drugs his drink.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
9/24/19, 7:36 PM
I wouldn't mind some of those herbs myself.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/24/19, 7:27 PM
will this story continue soon? also, Will Matt get hooked too?
9/24/19, 5:47 PM
> Was tempted to write a sequel series called The New Superboy or maybe The New Bizzaro. > Reading through this manuscript again, I remember an idea I had for the Parasite -- one of my favorite underused Superman villains.
Sep 22, 2019
Martin
9/24/19, 9:06 AM
Thank you.... While rereading and wanking to my own story (how weird is that?!) I just felt that the passage about Martin using the Colin-drone needed to be a bit of more spicy, so I edited that part, made it a bit longer and much more kinky. I hope you enjoy it!
Sep 22, 2019
Anonymous
9/24/19, 7:34 AM
Beautiful! A great story with rubberization, drones, great sex AND a bit of romance for those of us who are softies at heart.
Martin
9/24/19, 6:59 AM
For me, the LitRPG added a saucy flavor to it all. Actually, one could imagine really experiencing sth like this, in a "Ready Play One"-like world. And that would be immensely hot. Maybe I was born like 30 years to early. Or maybe not.
Medicaptain
9/24/19, 5:16 AM
i love it.. follow my hypnosis story too that I wrote