Recent Comments

9/23/19, 10:27 PM
Definitely not a bad story, in fact its a pretty nice and sexy story. I did wish that he made his roommate become subby rather than the top, but as it stands its a nifty set up. As a note two things stand out. One, it pays to be helpful to old people who ask for help. (hehe) Two, the roommate is generally speaking a nice guy, which is cool. My hope is that the main guy gets the other guy to become his, secretly at first but then with some work maybe more publicly. That said, as said roommate is a nice guy I hope his life isn't ruined or anything but rather becomes all the better do to the hypnosis. But yeah, good story, nicely written and set up. Very fun.
Anonymous
9/23/19, 9:39 PM
I love this! Can't wait to see where it goes!
Tim
9/23/19, 9:36 PM
well alright.....lets get this party started.....long hot summer...Bill order those shirts off everyone....permanently great story, next chapter please
9/23/19, 8:24 PM
Thank you. Upon reflection, I should've made Max the hero of the piece and not d'Lac. I don't know what my thinking was at the time, but I think it's a bummer that Max doesn't get to be the hero of his own story. Sorry, Max -- I hope the dick I gave you makes up for it.
LongtimeFan
9/23/19, 6:55 PM
Ooh, what a fun story--mysterious and sexy, with just enough explanation to raise questions. Great job!
9/23/19, 6:28 PM
Awesome second part! I wasn’t expecting that ending at all.
Anonymous
9/23/19, 4:22 PM
already better than the original one, Bill obeying orders is super hot
Anonymous
9/23/19, 4:19 PM
Please continue this series! I love it!
LongtimeFan
9/23/19, 11:59 AM
AWOOGA! Stoned Derek is definitely great at writing stories. :D Guys transforming into douchey muscle bros is my favorite, and you (plus my dear Hypnothrill) are the master of it! You also blend comedy, light, and just a touch of social commentary in your tales, which is much appreciated. Thanks for a great morning romp! ;p