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the cat
11/20/24, 1:01 AM
I enjoyed it! First- the mind games were cool. And it did not rush to having the hero defeated.

11/22/24, 10:55 PM
@the cat Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
11/22/24, 1:19 PM
Again, an interesting and fascinating collaboration. A wave of the future?

11/22/24, 10:51 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) I must admit AI has increased my productivity considerably. It's a very useful tool for an...inconsistant writer like me.
11/22/24, 10:42 PM
I was thinking the pack was going to be under heavy surveillance by the police because Mullins ratted them out. Glad to see I was wrong! But now I am *very* curious to find out that conversation between Alpha Pete and Barb was about... maybe the police found a lead on the missing Zach? Alpha Toddson has been conspicuously absent from the action, despite still showing up in the _Dramatis Personae_ section. Yousef is coming to terms more and more with his status as a werewolf. I'm willing to bet that he's more comfortable with it than Seth ever was. If only Seth could see his beloved Mondjugen now...
ls1999
11/22/24, 8:51 PM
I love this story! I hope it gets an update soon!
11/22/24, 8:10 PM
It can get lonely at the top. I can see the problem of surrounding yourself by only like-minded people miles away; surrounding yourself with _yourself_ isn't healthy. It's fine to talk to mirrors... until the mirror starts talking back. Suddenly, you're crazy. Alexander wasn't having fun playing games because hes too good at them. He's truly alone; no one can match him with his godlike powers. Alexander doesn't need more people below him, he needs someone equal - someone to surprise him. The best gifts you can get isn't what you ask for, but something you never knew you wanted. It's wishful thinking to think there's someone on the planet that could understand "Unit Prime" more than Prime himself, but I'm rooting for Alexander to find someone that can give him the love he needs but not what he "wants". Post-nut clarity can go hard. Anyway, I love Alexander. A dominant God with a heart of gold that resists his baser desires is super hot. Great chapter.
Nov 22, 2024
11/21/24, 11:36 PM
Okay ... I should say that this story was unexpected. It came about because when I was at the gym this morning, I took a shower after my workout. And in the shower, I couldn't help but notice that the soap that's provided by the gym, and coming out of the wall-mounted dispenser, looked really similar to cum. Well that just got my mind going. What if this is cum? What if I'm lathering up in other men's cum? Well, I got home and started writing. Did I know Sam was going to be a social media influencer? Nope. That just seemed to happen as I wrote it. But somehow, that created the idea of these camera pillars that would give adrenaline boosts to the workouts. Weird ... I had no idea where that came from. Anyways, I guess what I'm saying is .... I don't know where this story came from. All I had was an idea for cum-filled soap dispenser, and next thing I know, I churned out a story that I hadn't planned in the least. So there's probably continuity errors that make no sense, probably a lot of questions that I really don't have answers to. And no, I don't plan on writing another chapter. But if any of you guys want to add onto this story, please be my guest. And please please, if any of you guys are rich and think of opening your own gym that has cum-filled soap dispensers .... please extend me a membership.

11/22/24, 7:19 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I love this story precisely because it has a dream-like intensity and doesn't get too bogged down in exposition. It's packing a lot of powerful images--the white teeth, the moment where Marshall rubs his cum into Sam's dick, etc--into a short story, and I love the notion of the selfie-taking pillars delivering a boost of adrenaline and testosterone every time the picture is snapped. Great work!

11/22/24, 7:38 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I think you're right, Hypnothrill. It very much so has a dream-like quality. When writing, I really was getting into the fluid exchange. The visual images of rubbing your cum onto another guy, they rubbing their cum onto you. And all that fluid exchange causing the men to lose both their inhibitions and self-control, furthering them into a heightened state of orgasmic bliss. Geez ... I'm getting hard now just thinking about it. Thank you for reading. Now, when can I read your next story? Seriously ... I feel I'm not the only guy anxiously awaiting the next Hypnothrill fantasy.
11/22/24, 7:23 PM
Love this creative story and your writing! I’m rooting for Sanjay, Tristian, and Quintin to all end up together submitting to Djinn. Keep up the excellent work <3
11/22/24, 2:28 AM
so happy you are continuing this story ! a great chapter, things are moving fast for our college student

11/22/24, 6:47 PM
@[eastbay](/user/show/1576204) yeah, they're really... spiraling... out of control šŸ¤“
Anonymous
11/21/24, 7:57 PM
You know how to do fluids great! Makes me wonder what you have in store for this new recruit šŸ˜®ā€šŸ’Ø

Brock
11/22/24, 4:59 PM
Thank ya! We shall see, we shall see... šŸ˜
11/22/24, 3:53 PM
Hot story!! Great descriptions of transforming. Pics are jacking material

11/22/24, 4:44 PM
@[Rubber Fetish](/user/show/10021627) haha thanks! That's what I like to hear! ;D