Recent Comments

Felix
9/22/19, 9:59 AM
just for curiosity, this story is related with king rex, btw nice start
9/22/19, 8:02 AM
Bibimbap, I would be absolutely thrilled and honored. Yes, please. Thank you.
Anonymous
9/22/19, 7:16 AM
Oh. I get it. Beta Alpha Alpha. BAA. like the noise sheep make.
Bibimbap
9/22/19, 6:55 AM
Hi again! hope you're doing well. I would like to know, would be fine to you if I make some drawings or illustrations of your story? I love it so much, and it have sparked the desire to put some images on paper, but I'd like to have your permission.
clami5
9/22/19, 5:34 AM
terrific. one of the best mind control stories I ever read
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/22/19, 5:00 AM
i love that his own dick is giving him orders and suggesting how he should be treated! BRILLIANT!
A mercy main
9/22/19, 4:24 AM
I have but one criticism. naming a main character Lucio forces me to envision him as the overwatch character, so if at any point in the story you slip in Lucio saying "amp it up" or "speed boost" I swear to God I'll be dying laughing. please find a way to do this..
nycboot
9/22/19, 4:21 AM
Hehe - by the time the chef was fucking Jerry's head I was laughing at how masterfully you enabled this to happen (through an incorporeal character). Really nice revenge story - thank you very much!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/21/19, 11:51 PM
will you continue please?
Anonymous
9/21/19, 7:52 PM
I don't mind being similar I think you should go for it