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Anonymous
9/21/19, 7:06 PM
probably the hottest story i have ever read. Part 3 please!!!!!
You Wish!
9/21/19, 5:43 PM
I am very sorry for the very prolonged wait, everyone. As you may have surmised, I had hit a very serious Writer's Block with this story - after all, this is where the story originally ended, with Billy being turned into a pair of underwear for Randy and it ends there. I've had a lot of trouble thinking of a suitable ending and continuation without upsetting the balance, flow, and character of the story itself; trust me, I've been wrestling with what may or may not feel right as far as the story goes, and I've had a large amount of ideas thought up, shelved, tossed, and noted. However, I have finally came up with what I hope will be a satisfying conclusion. I can't say if it will meet everyone's expectations as to what I have came up with, but the story will end as of two more chapters; one more chapter to live out the wish, and the last chapter will leave it to its own epilogue. Again, I deeply apologize to all of you for forcing you to hold out on so much. I still have a lot of work to do for Chapter 6, but I hope that it will be adequate, with Chapter 7 being the big bash that everyone has been vying for for Billy. Please continue to have patience, and I will do my best.
Anonymous
9/21/19, 4:58 PM
I agree with Bimarguy. Also, would be awesome to see an origin story for this place! :)
9/21/19, 3:06 PM
Hot!
Anonymous
9/21/19, 2:00 PM
jais trop adorer a quand la suite !!!!!! ps
axel
9/21/19, 1:57 PM
jais trop hate la suite !!!!!!!!
Anonymous
9/21/19, 1:39 PM
great!
malskin
9/21/19, 1:03 PM
now Dick has accepted that he is gay, id like him to back on the police force in his leather uniform
You're back!
9/21/19, 12:25 PM
I love your work. Such quality in ideas and writing
9/21/19, 11:53 AM
> This story really does feel like it was written by someone close to them. > smh. Again, I wrote this story 15/16 years ago, in 2003. And, as I said upthread, this is a piece of fiction that I think illustrates exactly WHY this sort of relationship would not work in "real life". Although I believe that whatever people choose to do in reality, however dangerous, is their own choice. I don't approve of (and would never engage in) that lifestyle myself, but I don't deny anyone their choice, either. What happened in the case you mentioned is tragic, but it had nothing to do with my story. Please don't attempt to add subtext to a story that I didn't intend. > I too felt disgusted by Jersey’s beating and humiliation. I also really disliked Guernsey’s self-abasement and lack of self esteem when it came to the Bull. I’m disappointed to see the bully, aka “The Bull”, prevail. > I tried to imply that Jersey's relationship with the Bull was richer (and deeper) than we knew. And for the record, I intended to come back and write a MILK MAN, Part 3 that allowed a triumph over the Bull. Just sayin'. It ain't over till it's over. (But you know I'm grateful for your comments.)