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clami5
9/22/19, 5:34 AM
terrific. one of the best mind control stories I ever read
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/22/19, 5:00 AM
i love that his own dick is giving him orders and suggesting how he should be treated! BRILLIANT!
A mercy main
9/22/19, 4:24 AM
I have but one criticism. naming a main character Lucio forces me to envision him as the overwatch character, so if at any point in the story you slip in Lucio saying "amp it up" or "speed boost" I swear to God I'll be dying laughing. please find a way to do this..
nycboot
9/22/19, 4:21 AM
Hehe - by the time the chef was fucking Jerry's head I was laughing at how masterfully you enabled this to happen (through an incorporeal character). Really nice revenge story - thank you very much!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/21/19, 11:51 PM
will you continue please?
Anonymous
9/21/19, 7:52 PM
I don't mind being similar I think you should go for it
Anonymous
9/21/19, 7:06 PM
probably the hottest story i have ever read. Part 3 please!!!!!
You Wish!
9/21/19, 5:43 PM
I am very sorry for the very prolonged wait, everyone. As you may have surmised, I had hit a very serious Writer's Block with this story - after all, this is where the story originally ended, with Billy being turned into a pair of underwear for Randy and it ends there. I've had a lot of trouble thinking of a suitable ending and continuation without upsetting the balance, flow, and character of the story itself; trust me, I've been wrestling with what may or may not feel right as far as the story goes, and I've had a large amount of ideas thought up, shelved, tossed, and noted. However, I have finally came up with what I hope will be a satisfying conclusion. I can't say if it will meet everyone's expectations as to what I have came up with, but the story will end as of two more chapters; one more chapter to live out the wish, and the last chapter will leave it to its own epilogue. Again, I deeply apologize to all of you for forcing you to hold out on so much. I still have a lot of work to do for Chapter 6, but I hope that it will be adequate, with Chapter 7 being the big bash that everyone has been vying for for Billy. Please continue to have patience, and I will do my best.
Anonymous
9/21/19, 4:58 PM
I agree with Bimarguy. Also, would be awesome to see an origin story for this place! :)
9/21/19, 3:06 PM
Hot!