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Anonymous
9/21/19, 2:00 PM
jais trop adorer a quand la suite !!!!!! ps
axel
9/21/19, 1:57 PM
jais trop hate la suite !!!!!!!!
Anonymous
9/21/19, 1:39 PM
great!
malskin
9/21/19, 1:03 PM
now Dick has accepted that he is gay, id like him to back on the police force in his leather uniform
You're back!
9/21/19, 12:25 PM
I love your work. Such quality in ideas and writing
9/21/19, 11:53 AM
> This story really does feel like it was written by someone close to them. > smh. Again, I wrote this story 15/16 years ago, in 2003. And, as I said upthread, this is a piece of fiction that I think illustrates exactly WHY this sort of relationship would not work in "real life". Although I believe that whatever people choose to do in reality, however dangerous, is their own choice. I don't approve of (and would never engage in) that lifestyle myself, but I don't deny anyone their choice, either. What happened in the case you mentioned is tragic, but it had nothing to do with my story. Please don't attempt to add subtext to a story that I didn't intend. > I too felt disgusted by Jersey’s beating and humiliation. I also really disliked Guernsey’s self-abasement and lack of self esteem when it came to the Bull. I’m disappointed to see the bully, aka “The Bull”, prevail. > I tried to imply that Jersey's relationship with the Bull was richer (and deeper) than we knew. And for the record, I intended to come back and write a MILK MAN, Part 3 that allowed a triumph over the Bull. Just sayin'. It ain't over till it's over. (But you know I'm grateful for your comments.)
9/21/19, 11:21 AM
Ah. Something evil is whispering.
Anonymous
9/21/19, 10:21 AM
I am excited to read the next chapter! This one is hot
Alex
9/21/19, 9:27 AM
Read it all 5 chapters in one shot,! great flow to a real good story ! So many elements calling for more .... Looking forward for more stories from you !
Anonymous
9/21/19, 8:49 AM
What would happen when a journalist investigate Shadaloo and find out their secret?