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11/22/24, 1:30 PM
Very enjoyable start

11/22/24, 2:11 PM
@[OrangeBear](/user/show/10002019) Thank you, Orange Bear
Nov 22, 2024
11/22/24, 2:01 PM
Very hot story! And welcome back to writing! XD
Anonymous
11/22/24, 1:58 PM
God this was so hot, so excited to read more!
11/22/24, 12:48 PM
I loved this. I want to read more.
11/22/24, 12:34 PM
I read this all in one go and it was fantastic! I like the buildup to the double fuck. The manipulation and diversionary tactics like shoving his face in a pit; so hot and deliciously evil! Fabulous Double Daddy seduction/induction!
Lampshade15
11/22/24, 12:13 PM
Oh my god, this is so incredibly hot. Pushed all my buttons!
11/22/24, 9:19 AM
Loved this one!
11/20/24, 6:30 PM
Good start! Love the overdrawn main character. Lots of potential here for dumb jocks getting off in...unfortunate circumstances!

11/22/24, 7:48 AM
@[dumbjockhunter](/user/show/10025609) Thanks! And yeah... my goal in writing this is to build on that trope but with a "realistic" tilt, although still unconstrained by reality, if that makes sense. Glad you liked the PoV character as he's a bit controversial :D
11/22/24, 7:46 AM
Loved this! Super fun world you've built up, and even more fun when these guys use their powers to publicly humiliate others. It's everything up my alley personally and I would love to see more if you have the ideas for it whether it continues with these two or others at the school
11/22/24, 6:53 AM
Hot story. He wants it but doesn't but does and finally gives in to his true nature. So satisfying.