Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/18/19, 10:49 AM
Trent is one of the more sadistic villains I've read in a while... and I love it. And to the commenters wondering where the "mind control" elements are I think this chapter is laying the seeds for the pledge's descent into stooge-dom...
BodyOdor
9/18/19, 9:55 AM
Seriously good writing. The arc of the story is nicely crafted. There are echoes of "Fight Club" here. With a little work, this could be a movie script.
Martin
9/18/19, 8:09 AM
This story is simply spectacular! I am speechless and really honored to have it on this site. Just the right balance between an interesting, compellingly told story, devious and hot corruption of the protagonist's mind that made me hard like a rock and finally some deprived and dirty sex - even though I could live without the mpreg, but this doesn't diminish this in the slighest. So thank you so much, Ethan!
Anonymous
9/18/19, 6:00 AM
This was really hot. I enjoyed seeing the world building and Soren's descent from hero to slave. Will we get a sequel to see how Avernir takes over there world? i really look forward to seeing it
Martin
9/18/19, 5:57 AM
> why people complaining about it being reverse conversion therapy? There's a difference between a story about a single person being turned gay by a single person for whatever motive and one about a whole gay, heterophobic society where each non-confirming individual is forcibly changed into conformity. That's just as bad as some real life conformists who want to make sure that everybody is just like they are and hate everything that is in anyway different from themselves. I don't blame or accuse the author, I'm sure he just wanted to describe that society, partly because it's a deep wish inside all of us that everybody would just like we are and that we fit in, and his story is also a way to finally turn around the odds for once. But still, I don't like the angle and I can't read this story without a very bad feeling.
Sep 16, 2019
Anonymous
9/18/19, 5:25 AM
or, it could be a multiverse one!!
9/18/19, 5:14 AM
I absolutely love this! owo Great job!! :D
Anonymous
9/18/19, 2:45 AM
The Japanese is the phonetic version. Hard to translate. I tried.
Sep 16, 2019
Willie Cici
9/18/19, 2:44 AM
This is why I love comments. I thought this was a throw away story. The reaction has been overwhelming for me. Thank you. Let me see where inspiration takes me for the 'prequel' or 'sequel'.
Mutabear
9/18/19, 2:40 AM
While this was an interesting read, I don't really see how it involved mind control, transformation, or anything supernatural in any capacity. Not bad, I just don't really think it belongs here.