Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/15/19, 11:31 PM
I'm a big fan of this story. After reading through the whole series I found I couldn't stop thinking about the amazingly hot scenarios that the nanobots could create. I especially liked the possibility that the nanobots could make physical changes to their hosts' bodies. It seems fun to imagine what kind of realistic changes could happen. Like controlling a subject's metabolism (as mentioned) but also regulating a subject's testosterone levels and their body's response to exercise and diet. It would be fun to take someone -- perhaps a hot swimmer -- and make their body a muscle-building machine. Watching their body grow steadily more thicc and muscular while the subject themselves can neither explain nor stop the physical changes would be pretty hot. Likewise, causing a hulking football player's body to suddenly shred down and carve up into a physique worthy of a pretty-boy fitness model would be equally exciting. I can't help but also wonder if the nanobots could push some unsuspecting masculine stud into an intense, powerful second puberty with all of the changes (and embarassing moments) that would bring with it. I'd love to see the bots inflitrate someone older as well (like a young, handsome assistant coach) and cause him to have to deal with some of the same changes and mental modifications as the students. Could the nanobots effect an age reduction? Perhaps stripping someone like that of his masculine traits, muscles, and genital size? If so, it would be an amazing chapter! Needless to say, I hope we will hear more from this character and get to see how else he uses his powerful technology!
BankStreet
9/15/19, 10:36 PM
I could barely get through part one without cumming. If I could wish for anything for the next installment, it would be for Henderson to be "converted" into a willing servant of the Sultan, mindlessly doing the will of his new Master, even at the expense of his former nation. But that's just me. I'll be satisfied if he just enjoys himself. Oh .... and get him into those harem pants!
Anonymous
9/15/19, 10:00 PM
Can't wait for next chapter!!! Very hot!!
timytickle
9/15/19, 9:54 PM
Cicero really gets in my pants with his stories. thanks Cicero.
Sep 13, 2019
Jer-Bear
9/15/19, 9:44 PM
Tbh? My dream. Very well done. Thank you for writing.
Anonymous
9/15/19, 9:37 PM
looking forward to chapter 2!
AirStriker1
9/15/19, 8:33 PM
Thank you everybody for the kind words and constructive feedback. This is the first story ive written in over 15 years, so really wasnt sure how it would go down, I'm glad people enjoyed it. I have part 2 all planned out, just need to get time to write it :)
dsull96@aol.com
9/15/19, 8:23 PM
great story i absolutely loved it. please write more just great
9/15/19, 7:59 PM
I hope you write more to this.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/15/19, 7:44 PM
I agree with Bibimbap