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staritman 1
9/16/19, 11:43 AM
Hypnothrill per your suggestion cleaned up the grammar and added quotation marks to set the dialogue apart, to make it easier to read. I get to caught up in my own stories
StarryEye
9/16/19, 10:11 AM
this is my fav
Anonymous
9/16/19, 9:58 AM
Thanks man! You are a fantastic writer and you know how to magnify the masculinity and describe transformation! Many thanks!
Anonymous
9/16/19, 6:13 AM
Great story, for sure! Though wish the dumbing and slutting aspects were drawn out a sliiiiight bit more. But for a short story, definitely fits the bill. Would love to see more in this particular setting, if such a mood ever arises for ya.
Sep 11, 2019
slavethruhypno@aol.com
9/16/19, 1:25 AM
Great start!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/16/19, 1:16 AM
Slowly being transformed into the boy Bill wants him to be Becoming what a real man wants, needs and deserves is always so hot.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/16/19, 12:22 AM
Abyssdoor, yes he can, it was stated this in chapter 2
abyssdoor
9/16/19, 12:04 AM
Hmm, it's been established that The Editor cannot edit himself, but maybe he can change himself indirectly? Like, for example, adding to Greg's profile something like "since they became a couple Greg has taken to training Jean to be a stronger villain, and the results show" and suddenly Jean gets buffer.
Anonymous
9/15/19, 11:31 PM
I'm a big fan of this story. After reading through the whole series I found I couldn't stop thinking about the amazingly hot scenarios that the nanobots could create. I especially liked the possibility that the nanobots could make physical changes to their hosts' bodies. It seems fun to imagine what kind of realistic changes could happen. Like controlling a subject's metabolism (as mentioned) but also regulating a subject's testosterone levels and their body's response to exercise and diet. It would be fun to take someone -- perhaps a hot swimmer -- and make their body a muscle-building machine. Watching their body grow steadily more thicc and muscular while the subject themselves can neither explain nor stop the physical changes would be pretty hot. Likewise, causing a hulking football player's body to suddenly shred down and carve up into a physique worthy of a pretty-boy fitness model would be equally exciting. I can't help but also wonder if the nanobots could push some unsuspecting masculine stud into an intense, powerful second puberty with all of the changes (and embarassing moments) that would bring with it. I'd love to see the bots inflitrate someone older as well (like a young, handsome assistant coach) and cause him to have to deal with some of the same changes and mental modifications as the students. Could the nanobots effect an age reduction? Perhaps stripping someone like that of his masculine traits, muscles, and genital size? If so, it would be an amazing chapter! Needless to say, I hope we will hear more from this character and get to see how else he uses his powerful technology!