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9/16/19, 4:20 PM
Great story!
staritman 1
9/16/19, 11:43 AM
Hypnothrill per your suggestion cleaned up the grammar and added quotation marks to set the dialogue apart, to make it easier to read. I get to caught up in my own stories
StarryEye
9/16/19, 10:11 AM
this is my fav
Anonymous
9/16/19, 9:58 AM
Thanks man! You are a fantastic writer and you know how to magnify the masculinity and describe transformation! Many thanks!
Anonymous
9/16/19, 6:13 AM
Great story, for sure! Though wish the dumbing and slutting aspects were drawn out a sliiiiight bit more. But for a short story, definitely fits the bill. Would love to see more in this particular setting, if such a mood ever arises for ya.
Sep 11, 2019
slavethruhypno@aol.com
9/16/19, 1:25 AM
Great start!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/16/19, 1:16 AM
Slowly being transformed into the boy Bill wants him to be Becoming what a real man wants, needs and deserves is always so hot.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/16/19, 12:22 AM
Abyssdoor, yes he can, it was stated this in chapter 2
abyssdoor
9/16/19, 12:04 AM
Hmm, it's been established that The Editor cannot edit himself, but maybe he can change himself indirectly? Like, for example, adding to Greg's profile something like "since they became a couple Greg has taken to training Jean to be a stronger villain, and the results show" and suddenly Jean gets buffer.