Recent Comments

9/14/19, 11:28 AM
This has potential.
pet
9/14/19, 10:34 AM
would love to be allowed to stay in the DOG MODE, the rest of the story was good too.
Aaron
9/14/19, 8:24 AM
Is Mick sending out masks to get himself a harem? What was Tim trying to accomplish? Is he going to pursue Jeff any? What road will Kyle go down? Will he get something from the mask he puts on?
9/14/19, 6:32 AM
Really looking forward to where this goes
9/14/19, 6:16 AM
I think there's some good stuff in here, but I found it almost unreadable. You need to use either quotation marks or italics to set dialogue apart from the rest of your narrative. If you go back and edit this, you might get more positive reader feedback.
Aug 1, 2018
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:13 AM
Need to see more prisoners reformed and used. :3
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:08 AM
I love the relationship! I love how the uncle felt towards Aaron because of the father leaving, it adds character. I hope Aaron doesn't abuse his uncle.
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:07 AM
This story seems fresh and did not go the way i was expecting. hope to see more!
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:05 AM
Hey, great imagery, would love to see you write more!
Aug 1, 2018
9/13/19, 9:33 PM
This was hot then and its still very hot now. I love the concept of it.