Recent Comments

9/14/19, 6:16 AM
I think there's some good stuff in here, but I found it almost unreadable. You need to use either quotation marks or italics to set dialogue apart from the rest of your narrative. If you go back and edit this, you might get more positive reader feedback.
Aug 1, 2018
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:13 AM
Need to see more prisoners reformed and used. :3
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:08 AM
I love the relationship! I love how the uncle felt towards Aaron because of the father leaving, it adds character. I hope Aaron doesn't abuse his uncle.
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:07 AM
This story seems fresh and did not go the way i was expecting. hope to see more!
Anonymous
9/14/19, 4:05 AM
Hey, great imagery, would love to see you write more!
Aug 1, 2018
9/13/19, 9:33 PM
This was hot then and its still very hot now. I love the concept of it.
Sep 13, 2019
trytoknowyou@gmail.com
9/13/19, 9:23 PM
Sexy!
9/13/19, 9:22 PM
Oh interesting start. Didnt see the reveal if Butch. I do have to say the chip is fascinating. Too bad he only has one. Hehe
Sep 13, 2019
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
9/13/19, 8:18 PM
Sounds like that brown bottle was special as well.
Anonymous
9/13/19, 6:54 PM
Terrifying! Like "Brave New World" or "Animal Farm" with people...say, "Soylent Green" for sex!