Recent Comments

9/15/19, 4:30 AM
I think the story works really well once we get into the details of the Sultan's party and the changes to Agent Henderson. I just wish it didn't have that whole absurd set-up about the Sultan taking over the entire country of Iran and cutting off communication with the rest of the world, which kept interfering with my suspension of disbelief as I read the story.
9/15/19, 3:45 AM
Good writing, very hot. Yet strangely filled me with a sense of fear/dread.
firesix
9/15/19, 3:16 AM
Fuck man. Loved this. So hot.
Anonymous
9/15/19, 2:25 AM
INCREDIBLE. Came twice while reading. Can't wait for more.
Anonymous
9/15/19, 2:20 AM
hope you'll do a nerd-to-football jock transformation!!
Anonymous
9/15/19, 2:19 AM
love it!!
Anonymous
9/15/19, 1:48 AM
Excellent work
Anonymous
9/15/19, 1:31 AM
i love that ending. i hope to read what happens next!
9/15/19, 12:11 AM
Super interesting story, very interested to see where it goes from here, and what happened to Adam.
9/14/19, 10:42 PM
Very eager to see what you have in store here. :3