Recent Comments

Jalex
9/13/19, 10:47 AM
omg one of the hottest and well written stories ive read on hete in a while! more please!
Anonymous
9/13/19, 8:16 AM
Great start. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Stream Charli XCX
9/13/19, 6:48 AM
Please continue! Maybe in the next chapter the mom and daughter come back and the dad leaves them to be with his master? I would also love to see some foot worship.
Super fag
9/13/19, 6:45 AM
woulda preferred if his super hero name became a stripper name for him. all and all pretty good tho
Anonymous
9/13/19, 6:27 AM
great! awesome! Love where this is going. please don't stop
Anonymous
9/13/19, 5:30 AM
Nice one - woof Bill
M.
9/13/19, 4:31 AM
Thanks Heru Kane. I agreed with your points as well.
Anonymous
9/13/19, 4:15 AM
Loved it! Wish lord thaz will make cory a new pussy.
Anonymous
9/13/19, 4:12 AM
I love your fucked up mind!
Willie Cici
9/13/19, 4:12 AM
Those who can, do. Those who can't, critique - anonymously, to boot. You did a good job with your story, the exposition and the plot line. Okay, so it could use a little polish. Spell and Grammar Check can't hurt. You'd be surprised how many errors it picks up. I used it routinely. Keep writing. If Hypnothrill mentors you, for sure, you will have a masterpiece on your hands.