Recent Comments

Jfsc
9/12/19, 11:07 AM
Love, love, love this story! Great imagery and concept. I enjoyed the sci-fi component as well. MORE PLEASE!
Rik
9/12/19, 10:33 AM
Very erotic. Well written and sensual. A great idea. Write more please.
Sep 11, 2019
9/12/19, 9:06 AM
I liked this :) Looking forward to seeing what happens
Anonymous
9/12/19, 7:45 AM
yess loving the inclusion of the toys with the sexual acts !! hopefully will see them used in more raunchy ways soon
Anonymous
9/12/19, 6:39 AM
I'm so glad that I kept reading even though it made me scared at times. The ending was super sweet and perfect. The only thing that could've made it better was if his brother got rescued too.
Sep 11, 2019
Cute boy
9/12/19, 4:44 AM
id love if elias became a stupid twink with lots of emphasis on his low iq. great story super hot :)
Anonymous
9/12/19, 3:48 AM
was hoping the dad to be turned into a filthy toy. But good hot story nonetheless. hope you write about the toys converting other guys too.. coaches and cops etc. thanks for writing ! <3
LthrBikerThug
9/12/19, 3:41 AM
This is one amazing piece. I would like to become an emissary too. Where can I find that bar?
Sep 11, 2019
Anonymous
9/12/19, 3:40 AM
If you are using MSWord, it's the under the 'Review' tab. Spelling and grammar. You would be surprised how many errors. It picks up. Even when you have spelled a word correctly, it will pick up the context of the sentence and recognize an error. For example, one of your sentences reads 'he new . . .'. You probably meant 'knew', but since 'new' was spelled correctly, either your eye or the spell checker you used did not pick up on the error. Writing is only one part of story telling. The editing takes longer. Do it because the story you've written is hot!!!
9/12/19, 2:07 AM
An amazing and beautiful story! So sweet and sensual.