Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/12/19, 6:39 AM
I'm so glad that I kept reading even though it made me scared at times. The ending was super sweet and perfect. The only thing that could've made it better was if his brother got rescued too.
Sep 11, 2019
Cute boy
9/12/19, 4:44 AM
id love if elias became a stupid twink with lots of emphasis on his low iq. great story super hot :)
Anonymous
9/12/19, 3:48 AM
was hoping the dad to be turned into a filthy toy. But good hot story nonetheless. hope you write about the toys converting other guys too.. coaches and cops etc. thanks for writing ! <3
LthrBikerThug
9/12/19, 3:41 AM
This is one amazing piece. I would like to become an emissary too. Where can I find that bar?
Sep 11, 2019
Anonymous
9/12/19, 3:40 AM
If you are using MSWord, it's the under the 'Review' tab. Spelling and grammar. You would be surprised how many errors. It picks up. Even when you have spelled a word correctly, it will pick up the context of the sentence and recognize an error. For example, one of your sentences reads 'he new . . .'. You probably meant 'knew', but since 'new' was spelled correctly, either your eye or the spell checker you used did not pick up on the error. Writing is only one part of story telling. The editing takes longer. Do it because the story you've written is hot!!!
9/12/19, 2:07 AM
An amazing and beautiful story! So sweet and sensual.
MeddlerIncs
9/12/19, 1:59 AM
This better have a sequel, Mister Jockedguy.
Sep 11, 2019
Jack Taylor
9/12/19, 1:29 AM
It was really good and hot but as the person above stated. Please run it through a spellchecking software or ask an editor to help. Overall great concept
Sep 11, 2019
Boon
9/12/19, 1:25 AM
Personally, Im into heavy humiliation, so I'd like if the doctor goes for that, making Elias to act stupidly or make something very embarrasing. I saw you labeled your story with the dumber tag, so I'd like to see that too!
Sep 11, 2019
BankStreet
9/12/19, 12:25 AM
I am looking forward to the next installment; however you might consider using a spell-checker and/or the services of editor (perhaps a friend who can help). The errors were a bit distracting. Good luck!