Recent Comments

9/12/19, 3:33 PM
I don't think it's a bad story at all. The beginning is a little rough, and it could use a bit more build-up to the hypnosis scene. But the hypnosis scene itself is written quite well. I hope you write a sequel, because I want to know what happens next!
staritman 1
9/12/19, 3:29 PM
Please note it was my first story, I will work on getting better
Anonymous
9/12/19, 3:27 PM
Great story! Shitty writing. Please learn to write AND edit.
Sep 11, 2019
Anonymous
9/12/19, 12:02 PM
thanks man, I love your beginning
Anonymous
9/12/19, 11:31 AM
This is exceptionally hot. I can't wait for part 2 if there is one. The slow transition into a musky man so delicious. My favorite fantasy.
Jfsc
9/12/19, 11:07 AM
Love, love, love this story! Great imagery and concept. I enjoyed the sci-fi component as well. MORE PLEASE!
Rik
9/12/19, 10:33 AM
Very erotic. Well written and sensual. A great idea. Write more please.
Sep 11, 2019
9/12/19, 9:06 AM
I liked this :) Looking forward to seeing what happens
Anonymous
9/12/19, 7:45 AM
yess loving the inclusion of the toys with the sexual acts !! hopefully will see them used in more raunchy ways soon