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Anonymous
9/10/19, 4:21 AM
beautiful
Willie Cici
9/10/19, 3:57 AM
If if continues, where does it go? I'm open to suggestions. Please!!!
Anonymous
9/10/19, 3:02 AM
hope that Tim would also wear the mask too : )
Sep 6, 2019
cigarcubatx
9/10/19, 2:12 AM
Loved this, very nice.
9/10/19, 2:11 AM
Loved it! The slow alteration of reality!
9/10/19, 1:59 AM
I'm gonna second what M said. The whole forth wall break had me fast reading and going "really". I'm also hoping for our main guy getting involved personally as their dom top and fucking them. The whole watch from afar is only so interesting, especially when his cock can go into the holes of his two new good boys. I've really enjoyed the story but I want him playing with some subs. And not from afar.
Fantastic
9/10/19, 1:54 AM
another awesome chapter but now im confused on what would happen next
M.
9/9/19, 11:58 PM
So, I have loved this series so far, with only one critique of the whole thing. I don't really love the comments where he sort of breaks the 4th wall and speaks to the audience about the website, it sort of brings me out of the fantasy. I just don't think those segments flow with the rest of each chapter. Otherwise, I really have enjoyed this so far. One last comment about this particular chapter and the next: from the way everything has been written so far, I thought (and was hoping) that the next step would be to introduce himself as the Master top (or Dom or whatever) into the scenario with the existing two test subjects. Moving toward a "town/society/world" sized stature and having a giant orgy type scenario or whatever you meant by, "That one thing? Everyone else. Every. Last. One." will really take me out of it, and I probably won't read that or further chapters, which is a shame, because I have loved the series so far.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 11:41 PM
Wow... THAT was HOT as hell!