Recent Comments

M.
9/9/19, 11:58 PM
So, I have loved this series so far, with only one critique of the whole thing. I don't really love the comments where he sort of breaks the 4th wall and speaks to the audience about the website, it sort of brings me out of the fantasy. I just don't think those segments flow with the rest of each chapter. Otherwise, I really have enjoyed this so far. One last comment about this particular chapter and the next: from the way everything has been written so far, I thought (and was hoping) that the next step would be to introduce himself as the Master top (or Dom or whatever) into the scenario with the existing two test subjects. Moving toward a "town/society/world" sized stature and having a giant orgy type scenario or whatever you meant by, "That one thing? Everyone else. Every. Last. One." will really take me out of it, and I probably won't read that or further chapters, which is a shame, because I have loved the series so far.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 11:41 PM
Wow... THAT was HOT as hell!
Anonymous
9/9/19, 11:01 PM
does it continue? great start!!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
9/9/19, 8:51 PM
I wish I could find this on Amazon.
Trick
9/9/19, 7:21 PM
Great adaptation to the story! I always love how this story grew legs and ran. Everyone who has taken it on has made it better. Just like Hypnothrill, I look forward to your stories. I can't tell you how much it made my day that you've added something special to this universe. I look forward to what you write next!
firesix
9/9/19, 7:18 PM
Favorite story reworked by my favorite author. How could I ever complain?
Jan 13, 2019
Anonymous
9/9/19, 6:35 PM
Hot. The writing wasn't perfect but it made me nut anyway. Also skinheads today arent racist anymore
Anonymous
9/9/19, 5:02 PM
A great adaptation of an oft reworked classic. My dick twitched as soon as i read the title and throbbed the whole way through.
Anonymous
9/9/19, 4:14 PM
would love to see the next part with more gear theft!
9/9/19, 2:50 PM
Great adaptation! Leather bears aren't really my fetish, but I still loved all the little touches you added to the story.