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joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/7/19, 7:48 PM
I hope to see more of the Changed City, and more of the other cops
Anonymous
9/7/19, 7:44 PM
Excellent work
Bibimbap
9/7/19, 6:57 PM
Damn, you always surprise me with every new chapter. I love it, it's one of my favourite stories. I guess Tommy The Twink would perfectly change for Tommy Toy Boy or something like that! and the way Dick keeps turning dumber and dumber is fantastic, the dialogues are quite hot too: “So what brings you here today, mr.?” “Dick” Ha,ha, ha! I love it.
Anonymous
9/7/19, 5:37 PM
this keeps getting hotter and hotter omg
David S
9/7/19, 12:54 PM
Good god, that was some amazing writing!! What man hasn't wanted a bigger c0ck? I hope I dream of this tonight... Thank you so much for making my day!
9/7/19, 11:55 AM
I just read this again and realized it is, indeed, an outline for a novel. Maybe a prologue showing Chiron saving Pholus' essence? A few moments scattered about where Pholus feels Chiron's call? It could work very well. As I've said before, I already have an antagonist in mind.... If it's not obvious, there's a couple of literary influences on this story. The Anne Rice VAMPIRE novels, obviously, but also the wonderful novel JITTERBUG PERFUME, by Tom Robbins. Robbins is one of my favorite writers -- his freedom and playfulness with language continues to amaze me -- if you've not read him, start there.
Sep 6, 2019
Ruffcub
9/7/19, 11:43 AM
Wow, that was really hot. Love the freaky, body-horror elements particularly! Hope there will be more to follow.
Anonymous
9/7/19, 9:57 AM
NOOO, I cannot wait!!
9/7/19, 7:32 AM
I am just loving each new installment of this story! All the stuff with Tommy and Dick reinforcing each other's hypnotic training was so hot!
Anonymous
9/7/19, 1:27 AM
I wanna #trusttheprocess too!!!