Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/6/19, 4:37 AM
Amazing cinematic development!!
9/6/19, 3:41 AM
Agreed, great concept. Good story telling. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
9/6/19, 3:29 AM
It makes total sense for sure. But those unit Declans don't sound worthy of their high position, with so many other types of worthy unit in the great society. I look forward to unit Dan rectifying the situation. I'm sure he'll find a model of unit 1 that is truly worthy to administer the great society
jeep
9/6/19, 2:50 AM
Stormbound, doesn't it make sense that someone like Declan, with a God complex would want to cast unit 1's in his image (even though he doesn't resemble them any longer having "perfected" himself) Don't worry, unit Dan has a plan that should save the Great Society...
9/6/19, 2:14 AM
Boy, Unit Declans/1s sound really pathetic. To think they're supposed to be at the top of the great society? I hope unit Dan is victorious and able to save the great society. All of those hot sweaty musclebound unit 7's, those beastly cruel unit 6's, orderly and just unit 2's are all counting on him
Anonymous
9/6/19, 1:21 AM
Amazing! Can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
9/6/19, 12:54 AM
Please sir I would like some more
JR
9/6/19, 12:35 AM
I liked this story but i think it would be hot to get it from the perspective of Peter and Sloan
Anonymous
9/5/19, 11:41 PM
really looking forward to the next chapter!
9/5/19, 10:53 PM
very interesting concept!