Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/6/19, 3:03 PM
Fantastic development!! Can't wait to see were it goes. Congratulations :)
Anonymous
9/6/19, 8:56 AM
fantastic never enough cross-dressing on here
Xmale06
9/6/19, 8:55 AM
After almost four years I hope you'll soon be able to go on the story. The idea as well as the writing are awesome, and still as exciting as ever. You rock, man!
Anonymous
9/6/19, 7:45 AM
while it did not have to explain it in detail in this story, i wish to learn more about this FIT PHARM and their business model.
Anonymous
9/6/19, 7:34 AM
Is EVOLVE the name of one of their supplements? I really like those name and wish to have one for myself!! Great story !!
Demospam7@hotmail.nl
9/6/19, 5:59 AM
ooh. I like the ending! maybe have archer and web wonder unfrozen and give them eachother
Anonymous
9/6/19, 4:37 AM
Amazing cinematic development!!
9/6/19, 3:41 AM
Agreed, great concept. Good story telling. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
9/6/19, 3:29 AM
It makes total sense for sure. But those unit Declans don't sound worthy of their high position, with so many other types of worthy unit in the great society. I look forward to unit Dan rectifying the situation. I'm sure he'll find a model of unit 1 that is truly worthy to administer the great society
jeep
9/6/19, 2:50 AM
Stormbound, doesn't it make sense that someone like Declan, with a God complex would want to cast unit 1's in his image (even though he doesn't resemble them any longer having "perfected" himself) Don't worry, unit Dan has a plan that should save the Great Society...