Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:57 PM
This was a super hot idea. Loved it.
Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:50 PM
Most erotic fiction isnt written well enough, to enjoy reading more than the money shots. But this has a cinematic quality begging to be viewed in full. If its finished, wheres the rest of it?
Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:50 PM
absolutely love the story... it contains one of my favourite kinks ... seeing someone relatively private turn into an exhibitionist... hopefully he makes sloan feel more and more horny ... like make him come once in night and once in morning before he wakes up .. then slowly also while he is having his bath... so on
9/4/19, 9:30 PM
Clevis83: Yeah I can see that lol... I wrote it for a friend but I only felt like writing 1000 words so the result was this :)
DumbGooner
9/4/19, 8:33 PM
Loved this! So hot!
Anonymous
9/4/19, 12:16 PM
I love this! I can't wait for the next one
Anonymous
9/4/19, 10:26 AM
Football?
Aug 20, 2019
Anonymous
9/4/19, 8:29 AM
More evil underwear conversions please. make the world into a world of hot guys! how about a corporate drone? Armani boxers turned a normal person in to the best corporate slave. hahaha.
Anonymous
9/4/19, 7:42 AM
Nice development!! I like the way how you proceed the story, not so fast without detail or not so slow with too much details. Love it!!
Clevis83
9/4/19, 7:06 AM
it's a nice story and with good erotic potential, but maybe the scenes take place too quickly