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jeep4191@gmail.com
8/30/19, 10:56 PM
i have a few other characters planned for Relivit, so other stories will be coming! I just have a few other ideas i want to explore first (including the final parts of I am unit 7) Mdlftr, perhaps i will do an alternate ending for Von at some point in the future, you gave dome great ideas!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/30/19, 9:51 PM
I would love my Bluetooth speakers to be hacked like that
Mdlftr
8/30/19, 9:50 PM
I enjoyed this thoughtful ending. I wonder what would have happened had Von decided at the stage he was at, to try Relivit from the current moment forward. What if, instead of going back and changing the past, he changed his potential future, optioning to be something other than a muscular porn star? Where might that have gone? What if he had children in the future? What if he had gone back and Mike had survived the car accident but been crippled? What would life have been like then? A lot of fertile ground in the "if only..." arena. Creative story idea!
Anonymous
8/30/19, 9:45 PM
don't forget ant-man's powers are to grow and shrink
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/30/19, 8:54 PM
thank you! This is a fun story to write!
Anonymous
8/30/19, 8:36 PM
wow...this is getting really good. love the entire universe created here. excited to see what happens to Unit Dan!
8/30/19, 5:40 PM
Nope, completely coincidental
Mdlftr
8/30/19, 4:17 PM
Well written, interesting premise! Please continue!
Ed
8/30/19, 4:00 PM
I was forced to read this as I lay on my bed locked in my chastity cage with my friend edging me
Anonymous
8/30/19, 2:49 PM
is this about the site spam attack?