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8/31/19, 2:18 AM
Ooh, the units malfunction gets more interesting. And now it's learned some of how it works and the effects it has. Do the other units that it swaps with also become defective? Or is their designation simply replaced and they continue on as a normal unit of their new type?
8/31/19, 2:17 AM
Thanks for the complement. I'm honored that you think so highly of my writing. I don't write very much, and what I do write usually comes to me in one big burst. To keep a story going like you are is something I find hard, and you show great skill as a writer too. Your stories are excellent!
8/31/19, 1:54 AM
Unusual, but quite cute too.
Bibimbap
8/31/19, 1:02 AM
Any chance to read a follow up of this hot story? it's quite good!
8/31/19, 12:17 AM
really good...
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/30/19, 10:56 PM
i have a few other characters planned for Relivit, so other stories will be coming! I just have a few other ideas i want to explore first (including the final parts of I am unit 7) Mdlftr, perhaps i will do an alternate ending for Von at some point in the future, you gave dome great ideas!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/30/19, 9:51 PM
I would love my Bluetooth speakers to be hacked like that
Mdlftr
8/30/19, 9:50 PM
I enjoyed this thoughtful ending. I wonder what would have happened had Von decided at the stage he was at, to try Relivit from the current moment forward. What if, instead of going back and changing the past, he changed his potential future, optioning to be something other than a muscular porn star? Where might that have gone? What if he had children in the future? What if he had gone back and Mike had survived the car accident but been crippled? What would life have been like then? A lot of fertile ground in the "if only..." arena. Creative story idea!
Anonymous
8/30/19, 9:45 PM
don't forget ant-man's powers are to grow and shrink
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/30/19, 8:54 PM
thank you! This is a fun story to write!