Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/29/19, 3:11 AM
I love the story, it was at times erotic and other times deeply affecting. While most authors on here tend towards erotic story telling and revenge fantasies, you went above and beyond, giving a lonely "potentially Bi" guy a fulfilling life with a lover, even if there was tragedy, it wasn't out of malice, just imperfect reality of life. You should continue this story as a series. Allow others like Jake, another chance at another life. They don't all have to be gay porn stars in the end, the sky is the limit for Relivit.
Willie Cici
8/29/19, 3:09 AM
I'm loving this series. I'm in awe of 'episodic writers'. I have a hard time writing series. When I find a series that keeps me intrigued, I keep reading. Have fun and keep writing. You have a least one person reading.
8/29/19, 3:06 AM
this is my favorite chapter
8/29/19, 3:03 AM
Wish there was more chapters, I mean, why change him into a bottom slut if not to use him?
8/29/19, 3:00 AM
Entertaining and fucking erotic, wish this was a bigger series
8/29/19, 2:58 AM
The idea is really good, the series is pretty interesting but it has some mayor issues, and I don't mean grammar cause that can be fix or ignore pretty easily, but the pacing is odd, the conversation are forced and awkward and the "hypnotism" is dragged over and over and over again till you're just rushing to see how it ends.. And it's also difficult to read because the story changes somehow at the last 3 chapters where you don't really get what happened...
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/29/19, 2:55 AM
malskin, thank you for the kind words! i really admire your work. We will find out more about the life before, and how the GREAT LEADER , BLESSED BE took control in the few short months Dan was off the grid hiking
8/29/19, 2:48 AM
This should be a series of at least 5 chapters
8/29/19, 2:45 AM
fucking amazing
8/29/19, 2:41 AM
I read the chapter 2 first, I think i didn't even realize there was a 1st one till I checked the author's list and came across this story that is tied to another story I have read.. ALL the stories are amazing