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8/29/19, 2:58 AM
The idea is really good, the series is pretty interesting but it has some mayor issues, and I don't mean grammar cause that can be fix or ignore pretty easily, but the pacing is odd, the conversation are forced and awkward and the "hypnotism" is dragged over and over and over again till you're just rushing to see how it ends.. And it's also difficult to read because the story changes somehow at the last 3 chapters where you don't really get what happened...
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8/29/19, 2:55 AM
malskin, thank you for the kind words! i really admire your work. We will find out more about the life before, and how the GREAT LEADER , BLESSED BE took control in the few short months Dan was off the grid hiking
8/29/19, 2:48 AM
This should be a series of at least 5 chapters
8/29/19, 2:45 AM
fucking amazing
8/29/19, 2:41 AM
I read the chapter 2 first, I think i didn't even realize there was a 1st one till I checked the author's list and came across this story that is tied to another story I have read.. ALL the stories are amazing
Nov 7, 2016
8/29/19, 2:33 AM
I'm intrigue on who was his first guiny pig and if it grows in a greater work, like gangbanging
Apr 11, 2017
8/29/19, 2:32 AM
might be my own preference but mpreg would have been perfect
8/29/19, 2:02 AM
The evolution of this drug is sublime
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8/29/19, 1:55 AM
Stormbound, thank you for continuing to read. I admire your skill as an author, and am honored that you are keeping with it. Don't worry, it will end all right for unit 7/Dan/ Unit 6. You may not mind the physical transformation of unit 7 as it becomes (I hope) obvious why I needed to get unit 7 off the farm... Anonymous, thank you! Stay tuned, I have several more chapters planned!