Recent Comments

TheD
8/25/19, 5:01 PM
I believe you made the right choice. It's a beautifully-written, very satisfying end to a very engaging story. There's something almost *too* 'meta' about an author having doubts and multiple alternatives for the ending of a story about a man who wonders 'what might have been.' ;)
8/25/19, 4:30 PM
Nice ending!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
8/25/19, 4:08 PM
Oh good, the bots are out. Comments like the above (from a different "person" but with the same link) on every chapter of the story. sigh
8/25/19, 4:05 PM
> I just need an underdog to prevail once in a while - if that’s worth writing about. This ending has the same feeling like “Cycle One” > I've written plenty of "happy" endings -- though certainly not the majority, I get that. Part of the "fun" of a mind control/ domination story (like CYCLE ONE) is that, in order for it to justify its length, one has to keep upping the dramatic ante. To me, the protagonist succumbing to their fate is far hotter than prevailing over the "bad guy." (And you clearly have never read APPOLYON, my "novel", because that does the exact same thing -- in a FAR MORE sinister way -- I guess I'm a sucker for that ending.)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 4:04 PM
aw so beautiful....sexy as fuck, but also heartwarming. Well done, Pup. :)
B-A
8/25/19, 2:43 PM
LOVED your writing style for this series. Can't wait to see what your next story will be. :)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 2:38 PM
I need closure! I know it's not my place to demand the author to write how I want; I just need an underdog to prevail once in a while - if that's worth writing about. This ending has the same feeling like "Cycle One" where the protagonist has enough freedom to choose what he wants to do with his changes: become further indoctrinated or break the cycle, so to speak. Don't get me wrong, your entire collection of stories, especially this one, hit my interests too well for it's on good.
Anonymous
8/25/19, 12:36 PM
Really loving this story! 🐻 WóÓÔÒòF BIG BEAR!
Anonymous
8/25/19, 12:22 PM
This was so hot and everything I fantasize about. I want a strong hairy manly daddy to take me and make me his.
Argavo
8/25/19, 12:11 PM
Excellent story! I can wait to read the next chapter