Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/24/19, 8:12 AM
beautiful ending! great great great story!!!!
allabouttheeyes@yandex.com
8/24/19, 8:02 AM
I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have already started the next chapter and it is from Brendan's perspective. Hopefully it won't take too long to publish.
david
8/24/19, 5:43 AM
Nice twist and variation the way you turned it around on Darren. i agree that the inductions are hot in themselves, but then i've always thought the seduction and the shift in the power is the hottest part of M/s and D/s stories. It is the cat and mouse game in which the increasing dominance and control by the hypnotist and the increasing willingness to give up control by the subject is so very hot. Looking forward to the next chapter.
david
8/24/19, 5:26 AM
No time to say hello. I've got to go read the next hot chapter. Will you get Brendan next?
david
8/24/19, 5:16 AM
I love hypnosis and stories about hypnosis and mind control. Truly you seem to be very familiar with the techniques and phraseology of hypnosis practice. Great job with the story -- very hot!! Looking forward to reading further.
8/24/19, 5:05 AM
Great story! How about an insecure guy becoming a confident muscle man and a gay basher becoming a devoted twink boi for his former victim?
Anonymous
8/24/19, 4:46 AM
i'm so glad this series is back !!
Anonymous
8/24/19, 3:47 AM
One of the best transformation stories I've read on here, great writing!
Anonymous
8/24/19, 2:18 AM
my new favorite erotica author!
The Author
8/24/19, 2:11 AM
Thanks for all the comments guys. I can't remember what sparked this story ("aging", it's a bitch), but as I was writing it I ran into the "how to finish" issue--that's right, I wasn't sure how I would end it. The obvious ending, where the king gets the Warlord to cut off his own balls, was distasteful to me. I really didn't like the idea of anyone losing their balls, although the 'threat' of it happening is always exciting to me for some reason, go figure. So after I set the young king up as the Warlord (silver bear) pup/cub, the idea that they were actually father & son hit me and I liked it. Also, at the end I considered having the Warlord say to his son "I gave you those balls and I can take them away" as an ominous 'better behave' warning also crossed my mind. No matter, glad you enjoyed it. Also, I like to think of the pair of them like Thanos and Captain America, or 'The Rock' and 'The Mechanic' (if you know what I mean) 😉