Recent Comments

HyperMuscleMonster
8/25/19, 9:26 PM
I loved 95% of the story, but I'm sorry to say that the scene of Jersey's beating made me sick to my stomach. Everything else was great. (I like dom scenes, but both of them have to be into it.)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 8:58 PM
So glad for the new chapter ! can't wait for him to get more soldier slaves :)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 8:51 PM
This is such a nice love story en sexy too what more does a guy want ( o and don't forget the leather leather is always good)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 8:33 PM
loving this
Anonymous
8/25/19, 7:22 PM
great update, I've been looking for this
8/25/19, 5:02 PM
I too loved the original and am glad it's being continued by one of my favourite GSS authors! Would like to hear more about what happened to the infected of the first harvest but I'll be happy with anything!
TheD
8/25/19, 5:01 PM
I believe you made the right choice. It's a beautifully-written, very satisfying end to a very engaging story. There's something almost *too* 'meta' about an author having doubts and multiple alternatives for the ending of a story about a man who wonders 'what might have been.' ;)
8/25/19, 4:30 PM
Nice ending!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
8/25/19, 4:08 PM
Oh good, the bots are out. Comments like the above (from a different "person" but with the same link) on every chapter of the story. sigh
8/25/19, 4:05 PM
> I just need an underdog to prevail once in a while - if that’s worth writing about. This ending has the same feeling like “Cycle One” > I've written plenty of "happy" endings -- though certainly not the majority, I get that. Part of the "fun" of a mind control/ domination story (like CYCLE ONE) is that, in order for it to justify its length, one has to keep upping the dramatic ante. To me, the protagonist succumbing to their fate is far hotter than prevailing over the "bad guy." (And you clearly have never read APPOLYON, my "novel", because that does the exact same thing -- in a FAR MORE sinister way -- I guess I'm a sucker for that ending.)