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8/23/19, 12:40 PM
rubber some always kind of been the guy whose narratives tend to be very strong. Remember his debut story is basically a bunch of guys sitting in chairs experiencing something. detached and surreal to mass dehumanization sensual duck thing? totallybhis thing and I won't why a good thriller turns me on which is why I've always liked hypnosis and mind Factory as a story element. and in the explicit sex what's the angle on how it's working the line towards it for whatever function and that fits. Especially when other elements that aren't necessarily needed just for the sex or necessarily that's add on to the fetish or complete the Narrative. of what's going on
JockPupTraxxx
8/23/19, 12:11 PM
I think I'd like this club.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/23/19, 11:45 AM
Very nice & romantic. I wish I could find this forest to walk through.
Anonymous
8/23/19, 9:15 AM
Phenomenal
8/23/19, 6:59 AM
With each chapter it is getting better and better. I can't hardly wait for the rest. Hopefully there will be a lot of brother on brother action.
AgainstMyWill
8/23/19, 6:09 AM
Oh my God, this story is so hot I think my brain melted. Awesome idea, and amazing execution.
Anonymous
8/23/19, 5:58 AM
we've got an M. Night Shyamalan on our hands lol. interesting story you certainly kept me guessing about where it was going.
Martin
8/23/19, 4:55 AM
Mr. Anon: > Whoa, red flags with the flashback. Minors shouldn’t be shown in sexual situations. It's not up to you to show any red flags! The story is fine!
Elm
8/23/19, 4:46 AM
Loved it! if you are looking for other members of the pack, maybe Beast, the Hulk or Hercules? :p
8/23/19, 4:33 AM
MarvelHypnoDude You are welcome :) Wonder who will be next to join the pack :D