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11/19/24, 9:49 PM
These vignettes are really hot. Some of the best hypno/mind control stories around, despite their briefness. Each time I wish there was more though...

11/20/24, 5:02 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) That's such high praise, I really appreciate it! Maybe I'll expand some of them a bit in the future!
11/20/24, 4:56 AM
hey, thanks so much for your story, and for putting me on to this fantastic game series I hadn't heard of!
Anonymous
11/20/24, 4:30 AM
The mention of irreversible surgery turned me off. Being a sub myself I can understand why total submission is appealing, but permanent body modification is just taking it too far. Also, Alex's confession that he would eventually tire of Tommy and sell him to a new Master makes a mockery of the whole buildup to his complete submission. Until this last page this was an incredibly hot story, but the ending spoiled it for me.
Alex
11/20/24, 4:03 AM
This story was absolutely amazing, I hope you can make more works like this because I would love to read it
11/20/24, 3:24 AM
I enjoyed all three endings, but I feel this ending really seems the most reasonably consistent with the rest of the story. I find it hard to believe Mike would try to betray Ryan after everything with how deeply hypnotized he was, but I also don't think Mike would ever want to be cruel- it at least came off to me that Mike was uncomfortable with the way his friends were basically cock sleeves in the earlier chapters. That said, they were all really solid endings that all had really hot scenes, so while I think this one is the most realistic, I would say I think the one where Mike betrays Ryan is my favorite- it's really a deep look into Ryan's coping skills and how truly unhealthy they are for him. He was so quick to just completely destroy Mike for what was basically self defense. He could have easily fixed everything in so many other ways, but he didn't. Maybe this is a bit too philosophical for hypno smut, but I think it's kind of a beautiful representation of the kind of things one can do because they were hurt in the past. He'd rather destroy everything he's worked for and even team up with the person who -actually- hurt him then face his fears again... Lovely story, overall!
11/19/24, 2:47 AM
This was so great! Super hot and super sweet. Excited to see more

11/20/24, 2:52 AM
@[Vinner](/user/show/10028395) Thanks!
11/19/24, 12:50 AM
Such a hot gainer story . Loved it !!! Cant wait for more šŸ˜šŸ˜

11/20/24, 2:52 AM
@[Fafa](/user/show/14615) Thanks! I’m working on part 2 now!
Lampshade15
11/19/24, 10:52 PM
Love it, glad to see you're back with another chapter. I hope Daddy Sarge keeps Junior under control.

11/19/24, 10:56 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Ah, some want Junior freed, some want him controlled, a crisis! :grin:

Zander
11/20/24, 1:25 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) He is already under control, let him be freed up for the plot, to make the story even more interesting and then we can come up with something at the end)
Jammes
11/19/24, 11:46 PM
GH 1114101 It just great.:slightly_smiling_face: