Recent Comments

8/20/19, 12:29 PM
Don't get me wrong, I'm still enjoying the story, and some of the creepiest elements are also its hottest. (I love what you did with the flashback to show the violent assault on Jeff that transforms him into a cocksucking thrall). I just wanted to let you know how I was responding to Joe Jr's characterization.
8/20/19, 12:11 PM
Hypnothrill I totally understand your feelings of being creeped out. That is EXACTLY my intention. This story, and many other stories posted on this website, are pretty creepy when you think about them. In the original Pollination series, a man's balls literally explode on an airplane. In my first chapter, a father's back is broken while he and his son are being terrorized by wolves. In fact, your stories also have a major creep factor. In "A New Crop", I always wondered whether the melons are actually murdering the men in an "Invasion of the Body Snatchers" method? You never clarified whether men were killed, but it was certainly implied as there bodies were turned to dust. I'm doing the same thing here. I can certain give details on exactly what Joe Jr's age is. But I don't want to. I want readers to be creeped out. Maybe we'll learn more about Joe Jr when he's not in the presence of his father. His behavior could certainly be influenced by his presence. Do you act more respectful, child-like in the presence of your parents? I think quite a few of us put on the figurative "act" depending on what company we are with. And what kind of act or mask do we put on in that company? Anyways, if you're feeling creeped out, it's for a reason. I think aliens taking over the world wouldn't feel "wholesome" as a Disney sing-a-long. It would, in reality, be something much darker and infinitely more sinister.
Bimarguy
8/20/19, 11:12 AM
hi cock, i was referring more to Martins comments on the mind control aspect , the story itself was was good .
Anonymous
8/20/19, 7:33 AM
Pushed a lot of my buttons ;)
8/20/19, 5:48 AM
I really like this chapter. It's cool to see the fusion of Absman's original story with Rubbrsome touches like the pure white droplets of cum. One small critique: a lot of Joe Jr's dialogue really does sound childish (like things a 13 year old boy would say), to the point that it's creeping me out a bit. You never specify his age, but I'd like to think he's 18+, and yet his dialogue doesn't support that interpretation.
8/20/19, 12:16 AM
I loved these transformations. Each straight frat boy doing a fantastic transformation to the new gay them. And WOOF with Griffen and Chad....I am going to go fuck in the woods now then lie in a puddle of mud, cum and sweat.
8/19/19, 11:23 PM
Good story. I like animal transformation stories. I wish there were more resistance, fighting the mental changes, etc. in the story.
Readytochange
8/19/19, 10:23 PM
Please tell me you are going to post some of your old tumblr stories on here??
8/19/19, 10:13 PM
Minus the hair, which I can easily ignore, this was spectacularly hot. Loved how he got two for the price of one. Hehe
Cigarman
8/19/19, 9:24 PM
Horny! made this top SO hard - and envious of Jet. Well written too, which adds to it.