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11/20/24, 3:24 AM
I enjoyed all three endings, but I feel this ending really seems the most reasonably consistent with the rest of the story. I find it hard to believe Mike would try to betray Ryan after everything with how deeply hypnotized he was, but I also don't think Mike would ever want to be cruel- it at least came off to me that Mike was uncomfortable with the way his friends were basically cock sleeves in the earlier chapters. That said, they were all really solid endings that all had really hot scenes, so while I think this one is the most realistic, I would say I think the one where Mike betrays Ryan is my favorite- it's really a deep look into Ryan's coping skills and how truly unhealthy they are for him. He was so quick to just completely destroy Mike for what was basically self defense. He could have easily fixed everything in so many other ways, but he didn't. Maybe this is a bit too philosophical for hypno smut, but I think it's kind of a beautiful representation of the kind of things one can do because they were hurt in the past. He'd rather destroy everything he's worked for and even team up with the person who -actually- hurt him then face his fears again... Lovely story, overall!
11/19/24, 2:47 AM
This was so great! Super hot and super sweet. Excited to see more

11/20/24, 2:52 AM
@[Vinner](/user/show/10028395) Thanks!
11/19/24, 12:50 AM
Such a hot gainer story . Loved it !!! Cant wait for more šŸ˜šŸ˜

11/20/24, 2:52 AM
@[Fafa](/user/show/14615) Thanks! I’m working on part 2 now!
Lampshade15
11/19/24, 10:52 PM
Love it, glad to see you're back with another chapter. I hope Daddy Sarge keeps Junior under control.

11/19/24, 10:56 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Ah, some want Junior freed, some want him controlled, a crisis! :grin:

Zander
11/20/24, 1:25 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) He is already under control, let him be freed up for the plot, to make the story even more interesting and then we can come up with something at the end)
Jammes
11/19/24, 11:46 PM
GH 1114101 It just great.:slightly_smiling_face:
Zander
11/19/24, 11:16 PM
Very good chapter. The ending is very decent, but I would like to see an epilogue chapter, where all the men hypnotized by Ian remembered what he did to them and somehow took revenge on him. Ian could be a slave to each one in turn throughout his entire life and at the same time be conscious of everything that happens to him) And Jay gloated over him, fucking his boyfriend in front of Ian. Jay could erase people's memories of the equipment and use the device for mind control to fix people like Ian) Helping victims of hypnosis) and using it on villains by fucking them and turning them from Aggressors into victims, giving control over their minds to their former victims.
Zander
11/19/24, 10:07 PM
I hope the scene with the fortune teller was shown for a reason and it will lead the character somewhere. Maybe he will even be able to get out of Control and they will reveal to us why, how and why Sergeant did all this and whether it is possible to stop him or escape?

11/19/24, 10:56 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I'm still toying with ideas for the series, I thought it would be fun to mix things up just a little bit :grin:
11/19/24, 10:25 PM
# :sparkling_heart:
11/19/24, 9:39 PM
Fuck that was so incredibly arousing and stimulating. It kept me getting harder and harder but I wasn't able to cum thanks to that excellent storytelling. Thank you for that work!