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Anonymous
8/18/19, 3:22 AM
This is hot! Interesting twist!
Anonymous
8/18/19, 2:20 AM
I would be thrilled if you wrote more short, intense, scary stuff like this. 💖
8/17/19, 11:59 PM
Nicely structured; I appreciate the full-circle aspects that are foreshadowed.
Anonymous
8/17/19, 10:29 PM
The most boldly original story I've ever seen on here. Very clever relationship subtext too. Keep it up.
Aug 17, 2019
Anonymous
8/17/19, 10:13 PM
Great story
8/17/19, 10:05 PM
> ...and many times afterwards; great story then, great story now... > I've said before that this is one of my personal favorite series, too. I was really happy to revisit the universe from my first story (published five years earlier) and refine the concept into something workable. I reread/ rediscover this series every few years and enjoy getting lost in it -- this most recent read (getting it prepared to post here on the GSS) had me genuinely caught up in the BULL-fight in chapter 12. I was rock-hard reading my own tired-old fiction. Still, there are things that "date" this -- the flip-phones, desktop computers -- but that still seems charming to me. I definitely think there's more story to tell in this universe -- there are two leads left wide open at the end. We'll see.
Anonymous
8/17/19, 9:41 PM
I remember reading it in 2003 and many times afterwards; great story then, great story now.
Aug 17, 2019
Anonymous
8/17/19, 9:22 PM
hmmmm... a dumb straight finsub. if only they are real. So hot !
Aug 17, 2019
Slaveboy
8/17/19, 9:05 PM
more on this please so hot
Anonymous
8/17/19, 8:49 PM
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